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As well try to understand the sun, Perrin. It simply is, and is not to be understood. You cannot live without it, but it exacts a price. So with women.
-Gaul, A Crown of Swords by Robert Jordan
Poetism Commentary: "The Danger In Dreams"
The poem in question: The Danger In Dreams
There are two things that I remember about this poem:
I’ve had some weird dreams in my life, a few of which have stayed with me for a long time. I had a dream about ten years ago involving a girl I had dated “giving” me away, for lack of a better word, to another girl named Heather. I have since always been quite wary of girls named Heather.
Recently I have had some dreams about my parents and their divorce. In one of the dreams I was talking to one of them, telling about another dream which I had had a few nights before. Why do I dream about another dream I had?
Dreams are wacky.
Anyway, I like this poem, though the meter is rough. I don’t have anything deep or profound to say about it; everything seems to be spelled out pretty plainly in the poem itself. Um. That’s about it.